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Guys, how good is my stand up comedy? Im new, can I get some feedback for this video? Thanks?
Hi everyone. This is my first attempt at stand up comedy because everyone I know says im really funny. I decided to give it a a try and I know it might not be that good.
But I just wanted some feedback before I go on stage here in a week or so. You can see the video at (its 3 mins long):
http://www.funnyordie.com/videos/ae5024f171
Please let me know what you think. Oh and by the way I have nothing against fat girls really. Thanks
It’s okay.
1. Less profanity
2. Taking too long to get the joke.. people have short attention spans
3. You mentioned that you were drunk … how drunk were you?
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