Is this a good sketch / drawing — * photo *?

I have posted some of the United Nations very good, flat, 2D drawings in another question and some suggestions very well in my work better … is this an improvement? I know the picture quality is not good, my scanner is being stupid, so I had to use my webcam … btw … not supposed to look realistic … is a stuffed animal of mine that I have outlined. Good or bad? Better than my other? What could be improved? What is the animal (stuffed animal)? Here it is, thanks in advance: http://s676.photobucket.com/albums/vv123 / Bandito_Babe /? action = view & current = & zebradrawing.jpg last = 1

Firs thing that stuck the eye is the stuffed animal does not look like it belongs where it is recorded that seems to be slipping Faling or something. A solution this would be easy to add some kind of horizon line or something that the animal is sitting. The second thing is if you go to add a shadow all the way and add shadows into the picture as a whole will greatly improve that so far in the shade the entire picture, not just part of it. You're falling into one of the default errors begging common artist has to do with regard to composition. Its main character or object is going off the page, here is the head and not want that. The composition of the retina pulls the viewer right of the page and it's bad for their work because the viewer will become very quickly Board composition. As for the work that is right or wrong, this book is neither incomplete. You have much more work than you could do with it, but you have a very good start:) Now go and draw! : D and a small piece of magic for you;) Practice practice practice is becoming the "secret" every artist should know

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